Friday, 12 June 2015
The Terrifying Moment
I am learning to write a detailed ANZAC recount.
I am so proud of my words in my story they are interesting.
It can be tricky to find descriptive words.
The teacher can help me do this recount.
The next step for me might be to have a little bit of better words at the beginning to make my introduction more interesting.
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You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with some of the descriptive words that you have used to make your writing seem real and the short sentences that add effect to your writing.
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